Sardonic Disconnection
23Sep/070

Devils

The devil I know,
Part of me wishes he was,
The devil I don't

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22Sep/070

Words

These words we command,
Those lights they raise high above,
Allow us to shine

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22Sep/070

Flight

I cannot be saved,
I know not where this will lead,
I am forced to run

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21Sep/070

Tired

Eyelids hover low,
Forced further into myself,
All I want is sleep

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20Sep/070

Hurt

How can I tell you,
What I need to tell you when,
It will hurt so much

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19Sep/070

Saying

What can you do when,
What you need to say is not,
Going to help them

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19Sep/070

On Cliches

So I finally started watching Battlestar Galactica (the remake) last night. I think the writers must have read the big of book of cliched characters you need to have in your sci fi...

- Ace fighter pilot who happens to be rebellious and a woman (shock horror!)
- Low level politician who makes good after being thrust into a leadership role...
- Commanding officer with troubled past and family issues...
- Scientist with negotiable morality (OMG!)
- Disrespectful son of aforementioned commander...
- Drunken officer who puts people in danger!

The rest of them didn't really register. They just kinda stumbled around not really giving a shit about the fact their planets just got nuked to fuckery...

Also if you're not going to use music in any of your scenes whatsoever you'd better make sure you've got the best damned actors in the world... not a bunch a pretty pretty soap stars. Oh wait...

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18Sep/070

Back

So I handed in my city and guilds project today. That's the last of my outstanding non-writing/non-procrastination things out of the way. Tonight I can get back to editing!

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18Sep/070

Gold

Leaves fade to gold,
Blazing dew drops scorched away,
I welcome the spring

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18Sep/070

First Frost

Crisp breath jets cast loose,
Open window skin pulls tight,
First frost frozen life

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