Third Draft

I finished the third draft of the Derek short story last night. I'd been really dreading it since it was going to involve taking feedback and (red pen) comments from three different people as well as completely changing the ending (including the way the characters end up feeling). Once I got started the process went pretty smoothly. I rejected a fair few comments. Not sure whether that's a good or a bad thing, but there were certainly lots of improvements made as well. The ending flows much more naturally now and I'm a lot happier with how the whole thing hangs together.

It's been sent out for comments and my deadline of 31st October is looming...