Sardonic Disconnection
12May/080

The Grudge

Duvet pulled to chin,
Cold flush, sweat drips, eyes snap wide,
Her black locks hang low.

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4Feb/080

Migraine

Liquid vision flows,
Scrambled senses react,
As if through treacle

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20Oct/070

Waking

Warm duvet tucked tight,
Around the torso grown cold,
Toes peek out below

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15Oct/070

Bad

Bad I hear you say,
Bollocks I say to you sir,
Read some damned Preacher

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13Oct/070

Change

I am more than I was,
Mere moments before,
Yet I have far to go

How do I grow,
So much in so little time,
This is my challenge

I can see my prize,
The goal is there for the taking,
We shall be what we can

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13Oct/070

Writing My First Script

My first homework for my script writing class is to write a three minute script in which someone discovers something. It's an interesting idea as it immediately puts you in the mind of a mystery and tempts you to make the discovery as shocking as you can. What was really interesting for me was the difference between writing a script and writing prose.

1. Description is minimal. So long as you've got an idea of what is going on in a scene the extra little details you have to put into your prose to make it more real. The world does that for you.

2. Dialogue must be efficient. I was once told that dialogue in a script should push the story along, delineate character, give necessary information, set up or pay off a joke or indicate a sub-text... and nothing else. Rather than let the character speak for themselves and ramble as they tend to do in my prose I had to carefully look at each line and determine its value.

3. What happens is all that matters. Camera angles are not for you to determine.
While you may have an idea of how a scene would look in your head you have to push that to one side in favour of what your characters say and do.

4. Timing is everything. The homework is to write a three minute script and I've been acting it out in my head and counting the seconds in each scene to give myself a better idea of what this actually means.

Edit: 5. The ever wonderful Scrivener makes formatting a script a breeze.

Also the other part of my homework (watching movies) has gone really well this weekend. I caught Black Sheep (everything you could want from a killer sheep movie), Superbad (the Citizen Kane of dick and fart movies) and Memento (still not sure I get it all).

I also discovered that writing a haiku in English is so totally not about syllables...

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12Oct/070

Fishmen

Far oceans beckon,
Bored of life on the seabed,
We rise for revenge

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11Oct/070

Scroll

Old paper rustles,
New eyes hasten and consume,
Old words are set free

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11Oct/070

Broken

Reality breaks,
Fluid thoughts dive beneath,
Subconscious terror

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10Oct/070

Soilwork

Harsh notes yanked backward,
Turning over on themselves,
Flowing alongside

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