Sardonic Disconnection
17Feb/080

From One To The Other

I've come full circle. I started as a free writer. Then I tried to be a planner. My attempts to determine every last thing in advance (scripts an exception) and caused my writing to turn stagnant. This just made me worry even more. So I talked to a couple of friends about it. They knew I worried. They told me to start over. To remove the structure of the plan. To just write. So I did. I wrote something. It's short. But I like it. It's different. It's not planned. It just kind of happened. And tomorrow I'm going to read it out...

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3Jan/080

The Step Outline

Disclaimer: Okay this may read like stupidly obvious advice. A step outline may just seem like any other set of notes. For me I think it's more a case of my writing mentality adjusting.

I feel compelled to talk a little more about the step outline. We were introduced to them as a stage in the screenwriting process. I'm finding I use them increasingly often in any and all my writings. Even before I begin I have ideas for the story I want to tell. These ideas are more often than not scattered throughout the whole and there are gaping chasms that need filling before any of it will hold together. The step outline allows me to get around that. It gives me permission to write less. By this I mean I can summarise rather than get lost in prose. I can sketch out the entire piece before getting bogged down in the details.

This is a bit of a departure for me. In the past I'd been taught to free write and been a great advocate of free writing in general. There's still something attractive about plowing into a story and letting it unfold itself. But here's the thing: There's always something nagging away when I free write. I feel like I'm on the crest of a wave of words and any minute it's going to break and I'll be left unable to continue. It's because I don't know what's going to happen next. At all. A step outline lets me avoid that. I can still free write a scene and if it's strong enough it may alter the outline but I know how things are supposed to fit together. And that helps.

So yeah. Obvious advice. But useful... for me anyway.

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2Nov/070

Thinking More

Reading through these textbooks is great. It's pointing out to me exactly what I don't do. I take shortcuts. Take one character for example. He's leaving town. He's leaving everything he's ever known. I know exactly what he's feeling at this time. I know exactly has happened in the last couple of days to make him feel this way. But things are never that simple. If he'd had a certain experience earlier in his life then he may have been able to better cope with recent events and not end up leaving town. It's the absence of that singular strengthening event that's really the root cause of this situation.

I write in the moment. I feel what my characters feel but I don't give enough consideration to the events that enabled them to feel that way. This is what the textbooks are showing me and it only takes a little push, a few mental clues. I'm already thinking more. That's what's so great.

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24Aug/070

Planning & Plotting

So I'm wondering about long term plotting and the best way to approach it.

Should you write your detailed character bios one by one and then piece them together?

Should you list the events you want to occur on chronological fashion and then just let your characters react?

How then will you decide what information to reveal when? How will you know what your characters know?

Should you build your character network and then expand your plot from there?

Should you write a list of events you want to happen in your story and then tie them together?

Ugh... Guess I'll have to try them one by one.

Google returns these...

http://www.janetteowens.com/delores%20thornton_march%20issue%202004.htm
http://www.readwritethink.org/lessons/lesson_view.asp?id=932
https://www.cs.tcd.ie/~byrnes8/Trinity/Vision_Project/PG3.html

...as well as a few PDFs. Tomorrow's reading I guess.

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4Aug/070

Let’s Do This Thing…

Core idea: Check
Themes: Check
Characters: Check
Locations: Check
Timeline: In progress...

So here I am, writing again, flying towards the horizon of my own self-doubt, powering through. Let's do this thing.

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