Apparently a Triolet
I'm not sure. The meter seems... strange... Oh well!
I'm really disliking the obviousness of the words. I should probably be shot for actually using "angst", "hate" and "pain". Either that or I should start writing dodgy goth poetry...
Would you like to join us today?
No pain, no angst, no hate, just words
Come here, come forth, know my true name?
Would you like to join us today?
Life's is too damned short to stay away
This is your one chance to be heard
Would you like to join us today?
No pain, no angst, no hate, just words
I tried to keep each line to 8 syllables but it just doesn't read/flow right... I think the weakest line is actually "Would you like to join us today?".
Triolet Template
1: Repeated line one - Rhyme one
2: Repeated line two - Rhyme two
3: Write anything - Rhyme one
4: Repeated line one - Rhyme one
5: Write anything - Rhyme one
6: Write anything - Rhyme two
7: Repeated line one - Rhyme one
8: Repeated line two - Rhyme two
Options...
- Iambic tetrameter
- Iambic pentameter
